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you can't piece the celestial sphere back together

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she started with the universe.

and so it began:
words fell out of her ears like bass
drums, 
ba doom

and she crashed.

she was only trying to balance the 
planets on her shoulders,
only trying to line them 
up like mountain ridges along
the backs of her arms 

she threw moons out of orbit and
strode right through jupiter, 
she grabbed andromeda by the 
hand and she kissed him on 
the cheek,

she played football with the
black hole in the middle of the 
milky way and laughed as her foot
got stuck when time slowed down.

it was only when she'd held the last 
of all the stars in her hands,
only when she'd blown away all the nebulae 
like birthday candles 
that the cosmos
was plunged into 

deep  
dark
nothing



and she didn't know,
but for millennia afterwards, 
the intangible and invisible universe
that was running parallel right next to her 
told endless and infinite stories 
about the girl who cried

- even when time had ceased
to exist.
disclaimer: the first line is taken from the first line of a book called counting stars by david almond. i've never actually read it, but i heard the first line of it once and haven't been able to get it out of my head.
i have to stop writing about astronomy
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MomotsukiNezumi's avatar
Ok...I think my brain needs time to reboot, since the power of this poetic piece just about fried my mental circuitry.