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you remind me of driving
through country lanes in the
dead of the night

knees drawn to my chest
and the radio static filling
the spaces between my
cell membranes,
cytoplasmic fatigue

and the staccato jolts
of the car might be
unsettling but they never
leave me as restless as
the way your lips used to
curve around the sound of
my name
i have nothing to say apart from the fact that i'm glad i finally wrote something after so many failed attempts this week
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That last stanza is just beautiful.
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anobrain Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
thank you. :heart:
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imperfect-parachute Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student Writer

and the staccato jolts
of the car might be
unsettling but they never
leave me as restless as
the way your lips used to
curve around the sound of
my name

 

Love this!!!! Beautiful work!!! =D

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anobrain Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
thanks so much :heart:
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imperfect-parachute Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Student Writer
You're most welcome =D
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blubbityblub Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"the way your lips used to
curve around the sound of
my name"

ohhhh i love this.
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anobrain Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
thank you :cuddle::heart:
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Plasticwalrus93 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
This is really good which is rare on this site
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blubbityblub Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
check out ~MadamWoe. There are lots of great writers and poets on this sites, you just have to dig.
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anobrain Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
aw, thank you so much. good stuff really isn't all that rare some amazing deviants that i know of are =ssolaris, ~itselliegasp, *toxic-nebulae, and =Sammur-amat, just to name a few. i hope you find some work that you love, i highly doubt that you won't. :heart:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014   General Artist
sooooooooo late but thank dearly and you know i adore you to the moon and back! :tighthug: :heart:
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anobrain Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
:huggle::heart::heart:
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ssensory Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013   Writer
:blush: I'm honored that I'm one of the people you listed...the first even! You are too kind. Thank you so much, lovely. :hug:
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anobrain Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
of course, my dear!!! you don't need to thank me :cuddle:
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itselliegasp Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i feel so honoured to be mentioned ^.^ aha
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anobrain Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
:heart:
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Plasticwalrus93 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
It's just a lot of stuff here is melodramatic
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