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i. rivers are stronger than oceans despite their size
they tumble through sharp mountains 
but they never, ever stop

ii. i can rush and pick up sediments 
and disperse them where i wish





iii. i'm lying -
i knew you saw it anyway,
there's seaweed in my fingernails
and salt on my breath




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Given 2013-07-30
tell a lie by ~ellathepirate is composed of beautiful language and vivid imagery. ( Suggested by skygazing and Featured by Nichrysalis )
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anobrain Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
thank you so much :glomp::heart:
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ghearradh Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
you are so very welcome! :)
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SMAdams Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is wonderful. A subtle beauty really makes this piece stand out from the rest. Well done, hun. :heart:
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anobrain Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
thank you dear :aww::heart:
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SMAdams Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are most welcome. :heart:
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ghearradh Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
ah this poem is so amazing. i'm honestly speechless. i have nothing to say.
just, wow.

congratulations of the Daily Deviation. it is well deserved. :heart:
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anobrain Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
thank you so so much :glomp::heart:
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anila73 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*blinks*
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anobrain Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
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